As stated in our post about the ethos of
“Masters of War,” people knew Bob Dylan as a rebellious soul. Unsurprisingly,
in “Masters of War” he went against “the man” and criticized America’s
involvement in Vietnam. With Dylan’s reputation as a protestor in mind, one can
clearly identify his logical argument of the song. Dylan argued that the
politicians, the “masters,” responsible for the fighting in Vietnam caused
great amounts violence and death, unaware and apathetic to the true effects of
their actions. He supports his belief of the masters’ indifference through the
lyrics, “You fasten the triggers for the others to fire. Then you set back and
watch when the death count gets higher. You hide in your mansion as young
people’s blood, flows out of their bodies and is buried in mud.” These words
show that the politicians did not care about the rising death toll in Vietnam; as
long as they could hide from the violence, they were content. He also asserts
his belief that the government officials did not care about the lives of the
soldiers through the lyrics, “You play with my world like it’s your little toy.”
The comparison of Bob’s life to a toy demonstrates how the politicians did not
take their actions seriously. In addition, Bob Dylan strengthens his argument
further by appealing to logos through the use of allusions. For example, he
states, “But there’s one thing I know, though I’m younger than you. Even Jesus would never forgive what you do.”
By inserting this widely historical/religious figure, Dylan makes use of an
assumption that almost everyone understands. Therefore, the audience can use
previous knowledge about Jesus to make the conclusion that the actions of the
masters of war were so heinous that even the One known for loving all people could never
forgive the politicians’ deeds. Although Dylan makes a stronger appeal to
pathos in his song, “Masters of War” has elements of logos that help the
audience form an opinion, perhaps one similar to that of the writer’s.
Excellent post; I agree with what you said regarding the politicians' apathy as well as the religious allusions. If I can just offer some friendly advice, I would recommend stating what the specific feelings are that the song evokes. For me, these would be sadness about the death of soldiers and anger at the politicians who don't care that they are sending young boys to their death.
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a great job creating imagery with the song lyrics. I would suggest focusing more on pathos, because you started to stray a bit and talk about logos at the end. However, I thought you guys did a good job dissecting the lyrics and message of the song. You throughly explained the pathos appeal.
ReplyDeleteI feel that you didn't deal with the "You fasten the triggers for the others to fire. Then you set back and watch when the death count gets higher. You hide in your mansion as young people’s blood, flows out of their bodies and is buried in mud" quote enough. I agree that it shows that politicians didn't care about the death tolls, but you don't need that entire quote for that. You should either shorten the quote or deal more thoroughly with it.
ReplyDeleteThis is a good post. I am confused though, isn't it supposed to be about logos? All the comments talk about adding other elements to the post, but is that necessary if its primary focus is logos?
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